15. Discuss the use of quotations from literature in Fahrenheit 451. Which works are quoted and to what effect? Pay specific attention to "Dover Beach", the Bible, and quotes from Shakespeare. Explain using specific examples from the text in your arguement.
I think Ray Bradbury uses quotes from literature that have been very influential and important throughout history. I think he wants to prove how significant books are and why it is so awful that there are firemen that have the job of burning the books. He predicts in the future more and more people will pay less attention to these books and their significance won't be acknowledged. On page 55, Bradbury talks about how Hamlet was shortened even though it was a classic by Shakespeare "But many were those whose sole knowledge of Hamlet... whose sole knowledge, as I say, of Hamlet was a one-page digest in a book that claimed: now at last you can read all the classics; keep up with your neighbors." He is making a point that even great classics like Hamlet is shortened to only one page because people don't find it necessary to read and study it. Beatty thinks that Shakespeare is insignificant "Why don't you belch Shakespeare at me you fumbling snob? 'There is no terror, Cassius, in your threats, for I am arm'd so strong in honesty that they pass me as an idle wind, which I respect not!'" (Page 119) I think Bradbury is also saying that
Shakespeare is so well-know that even the head of the firemen is knowledgeable in his work.
On page 76, Ray Bradbury talks about how the Bible might not even be considered a valuable piece of literature in the future. "How many copies of the Bible are left in this country?... How many copies of Shakespeare and Plato? None! You know as well as I do. None!" No Bibles left in the enitre country proves how little importance it has. Montag's wife gets mad at him for trying to keep the Bible because she thinks she is much more important than a book. On the last page of the book (page 165) the Bible is quoted ad Montag and the men move back toward the war damaged town. "And on either side of the river was there a tree of life, which bare twelve manner of fruits, and yielded her fruit every month; And the leaves of the tree were for the healing of the nations." Montag remembers this quote from the Bible because it has meaning to him. This quote is inspiring him to want to rebuild his town. A book can have so much meaning to a person that they can connect it to their lives and let it inspire them and I think that's what Ray Bradbury is saying with this quote.
How influential books can be is another thing Bradbury mentions. On page 99, Montag reads a poem, Dover Beach, to Mildred and her friends who don't read literature and aren't familiar with much of it. "Ah, love, let us be true... Hath really neither joy, nor love, nor light... swept with confused alarms of struggle and flight, where ignorant armies clas by night." After Montag finished reading the poem one of the ladies, Mr. Phelps, starting crying. I think she was so overwhlemed by the beauty and meaning of the poem because she had never heard something like that before. I think Ray Bradbury is trying to prove how much of an effect literature can have on a person. When Montag and the other firemen must burn a woman's house she refuses to leave. She quotes Latimer "'Play the man, Master Ridley; we shall this day light such a candle, by God's grace, in England, as I trust shall never be put out.'" (Page 36) This is what Latimer said to Nicholas Ridley as they were being burnt alive. I think Bradbury is comparing being burnt alive to burning books and saying they are equally awful. The fact that the woman would rather be burnt with the books than survive also says how important they can be to a person. Books can be so meaningful and emotional and they should hold a special place in all our hearts.
Sunday, June 3, 2012
Tuesday, May 29, 2012
Tu Tuesday- Local
http://www.guilderlandspotlight.com/news/2012/may/15/perfect-game-all/#h100549-p8
A couple from Rotterdam, Donna and Ed Shappy, decided to host six baseball players of the Albany Dutchmen Baseball League during the summer. The couple is older and they thought it would be interesting and fun to host college baseball players. Donna Shappy said "“I thought, our son’s grown and out of this house and … I love to have people in. I thought it would make the summer interesting and it certainly did.” The boys come to play baseball from all different states. Two boys were from Florida and one was from Louisiana, one from Kansas, one from Arizona and one from Connecticut. For the Shappy's to allow six college boys to stay in their house is such a nice gesture and really shows that they enjoy helping others. “My husband and I are in our mid-50s, so bringing six college guys into our home definitely made life different, but it was a good different.” Denise Polsinelli explains what the host family's responibilities are "“The commitment is just to provide a home atmosphere for the boys and some meals. The team does feed them after each game but they’re going to need breakfast and lunch material.” So not only did the Shappy have to house six boys they had to feed them too! It couldn't have been easy and it must've took much effort. Polsinelli also explains that the Shappy's took an extra step "Most families take one player, some take two or three, but few take on six like the Shappys." In reward for their services the Shappy's were allowed to attend all games for free and were invited to any bonding event like a pinic or family fun day.
A couple from Rotterdam, Donna and Ed Shappy, decided to host six baseball players of the Albany Dutchmen Baseball League during the summer. The couple is older and they thought it would be interesting and fun to host college baseball players. Donna Shappy said "“I thought, our son’s grown and out of this house and … I love to have people in. I thought it would make the summer interesting and it certainly did.” The boys come to play baseball from all different states. Two boys were from Florida and one was from Louisiana, one from Kansas, one from Arizona and one from Connecticut. For the Shappy's to allow six college boys to stay in their house is such a nice gesture and really shows that they enjoy helping others. “My husband and I are in our mid-50s, so bringing six college guys into our home definitely made life different, but it was a good different.” Denise Polsinelli explains what the host family's responibilities are "“The commitment is just to provide a home atmosphere for the boys and some meals. The team does feed them after each game but they’re going to need breakfast and lunch material.” So not only did the Shappy have to house six boys they had to feed them too! It couldn't have been easy and it must've took much effort. Polsinelli also explains that the Shappy's took an extra step "Most families take one player, some take two or three, but few take on six like the Shappys." In reward for their services the Shappy's were allowed to attend all games for free and were invited to any bonding event like a pinic or family fun day.
Monday, May 28, 2012
6.Should Memorial Day be a time to remember only veterans or all those who have died?
I think Memorial Day is a time to remember all those who have fought for our country whether they are still alive or have passed away. Just because there are soldiers who aren't alive anymore doesn't mean there is any less reason to honor what they did for us. They have done just as much as the veterans still alive today. The soldiers who died during the war aren't as fortunate as the soldiers who were able to survive through the war. All the soliders are the reason why we live in such an amazing country and why we all have freedoms. It's important to honor and remember every single man and woman who have risked their own life for every person in the United States. In times of war these men and women have stepped up to serve our country even if it meant that they might not survive. It is an honor to be a soldier and each one should be recognized and remembered for what they have done. Memorial Day should be a time to realize how fortunate we are to live in America and be able to have freedom. We wouldn't be living the way we are today if it weren't for the soldiers who have fought for our freedom and our rights. I consider myself and every other person living in this country exremely fortunate and I thank the people who have made this possible for us today.
Tuesday, May 22, 2012
What is Crippling Us?
John Taylor Gatto presents his opinion on how public education cripples children by telling his experiences with education. He is a retired school teacher, and was once a student in school himself, so he has had much experience with children in the classroom, both his peers and students of his. Gatto explains how children have become so uninterested in school and how they don't seem to care about it. In his article Against School he says "They said the work was stupid, that it made no sense, that they already knew it. They said they wanted to be doing something real, not just sitting around." School has become so boring for kids and even for their teachers. Gatto shares his experience of being a teacher "Boredom is the common condition of schoolteachers, and anyone who has spent time in a teachers' lounge can vouch for the low energy, the whining, the dispirited attitudes, to be found there. When asked why they feel bored, the teachers tend to blame the kids, as you might expect." He also thinks that the way children are taught in school isn't as effective and there are other ways to learn. "...six classes a day, five days a week, nine months a year, for twelve years. Is this deadly routine really necessary?" This is how children get bored because they spend so much time sitting in a desk. Gatto doesn't think it's necessary to be in school for so long and kids can get an education in better ways.
In Fahrenheit 451, Ray Bradbury expresses a similar opinion that people have become bored with learning and learning is being replaced by more interesting things and by fun. Ray Bradbury presents his thoughts in this science-fiction novel and creates a story of what he believes might become of the future. He predicts that no one will want to take the time to sit and read books anymore or try to learn new things because it takes too long an is too boring. On page 54 he says "Classics cut to fit fifteen-minute radio shows, then cut again to fill a two-mintue book column, winding up at last as a ten- or twelve-line dictionary resume." Bradbury seems to believe that in the future no one will want to relax and take their time. Everything will be rushed and fast-paced. No time to slow down or sit and talk or think and have time to yourself. "Speed up the film, Montag, quick. Click, Pic, Look, Eye, Now, Flick, Here, There, Swift, Pace, Up, Down, In, Out, Why, How, Who, What, Where, Eh? Uh! Bang! Smack! Wallop, Bing, Bong, Boom!... Whirl man's mind around about so fast under the pumping hands of publishers, exploiters, broadcasters that centrifuge flings off all unnecessary time-wasting thought!" (Page 55). Bradbury even goes to extremes and describes bilboards that have to be stretched out so people can read them because they're driving so fast to get somewhere.
I agree with both Gatto and Bradbury. Our lives and our daily routines are becoming so fast-paced and especially with new technology no one wants to wait for anything. No one even has to the patience to wait. Everyone wants something at the press of a button. I can relate to this because I never feel like I have any free time. I'm always going to school or rushing to finish homework before or after practice or going from one practice to the next or to a party or an event. Adults are even more of a rush getting to work, leaving work to pick up kids it never ends! Gatto is right that kids have trouble sitting in school for six hours a day without getting bored. When you're sitting in a class taking notes for an hour and twenty minutes it's hard not to get distracted. I think both of their opinions are accurate predictions of the future. There won't be much time to slow down and relax and certain things will probably change because of this like public education.
In Fahrenheit 451, Ray Bradbury expresses a similar opinion that people have become bored with learning and learning is being replaced by more interesting things and by fun. Ray Bradbury presents his thoughts in this science-fiction novel and creates a story of what he believes might become of the future. He predicts that no one will want to take the time to sit and read books anymore or try to learn new things because it takes too long an is too boring. On page 54 he says "Classics cut to fit fifteen-minute radio shows, then cut again to fill a two-mintue book column, winding up at last as a ten- or twelve-line dictionary resume." Bradbury seems to believe that in the future no one will want to relax and take their time. Everything will be rushed and fast-paced. No time to slow down or sit and talk or think and have time to yourself. "Speed up the film, Montag, quick. Click, Pic, Look, Eye, Now, Flick, Here, There, Swift, Pace, Up, Down, In, Out, Why, How, Who, What, Where, Eh? Uh! Bang! Smack! Wallop, Bing, Bong, Boom!... Whirl man's mind around about so fast under the pumping hands of publishers, exploiters, broadcasters that centrifuge flings off all unnecessary time-wasting thought!" (Page 55). Bradbury even goes to extremes and describes bilboards that have to be stretched out so people can read them because they're driving so fast to get somewhere.
I agree with both Gatto and Bradbury. Our lives and our daily routines are becoming so fast-paced and especially with new technology no one wants to wait for anything. No one even has to the patience to wait. Everyone wants something at the press of a button. I can relate to this because I never feel like I have any free time. I'm always going to school or rushing to finish homework before or after practice or going from one practice to the next or to a party or an event. Adults are even more of a rush getting to work, leaving work to pick up kids it never ends! Gatto is right that kids have trouble sitting in school for six hours a day without getting bored. When you're sitting in a class taking notes for an hour and twenty minutes it's hard not to get distracted. I think both of their opinions are accurate predictions of the future. There won't be much time to slow down and relax and certain things will probably change because of this like public education.
Sunday, May 20, 2012
Tried and True
http://writingprompts.tumblr.com/post/17477297690/my-28-most-tried-and-true-writing-prompts
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Always be kind.
Be happy.
Consider all the possibilites.
Don't let one thing ruin your whole day.
Enjoy some time to yourself every once in a while.
Find something you love to do.
Give more than you get.
Help people who are less fortunate than you.
It's okay to ask for help when you need it.
Just be yourself, in the end you'll know who likes you, for you.
Keep your best memories with you forever.
Laugh as much as possible.
Make new friendships.
Never underestimate anyone.
Open your mind to change.
Positivity is key.
Question the unknown.
Remember your past mistakes so you don't make them again.
Surround yourself with people you love.
The little things shouldn't stress you out.
Understand your mistakes.
Venture to new experiences.
Work for your goals.
Xanadu's should be visited often.
You can always improve.
Zealous people are fun to be around.
Wednesday, May 16, 2012
TU Tuesday- Commencement Speech
http://news.harvard.edu/gazette/story/2008/06/text-of-j-k-rowling-speech/ http://teamcoco.com/content/watch-conan-give-dartmouth-college-commencement-address
In order to succeed in life you have to fail at some point. J.K. Rowling knows that failure is an important part of success. "On this wonderful day when we are gathered together to celebrate your academic success, I have decided to talk to you about the benefits of failure." Some people might question this and wonder how in the world failure can help you succeed. Failure can push you to succeed, to be better and to over come your mistakes and misfortunes. "You might be driven by a fear of failure quite as much as a desire for success." Many people are afriad of failure and so was J.K. Rowling "What I feared most for myself at your age was not poverty, but failure." I believe that you can't fear failure because then you will never be able to achieve your goals because you're too scared of dissapointment. Instead of fearing failure you should accept it. Accept that it is a part of life and let it be the force propelling you to be successful.
Everyone experiences failure at some point in their lives, famous people, professional athletes, even people who have graduated from Yale or Harvard. Conan O'brien said in his commencement speech at Dartmouth University " But today I tell you that whether you fear it or not, disappointment will come. The beauty is that through disappointment you can gain clarity, and with clarity comes conviction and true originality." J.K. Rowling shared her experience with failure in her speech "Now, I am not going to stand here and tell you that failure is fun. That period of my life was a dark one, and I had no idea that there was going to be what the press has since represented as a kind of fairy tale resolution. I had no idea then how far the tunnel extended, and for a long time, any light at the end of it was a hope rather than a reality."
You may experience failure early in life, J.K. Rowling said "I am not dull enough to suppose that because you are young, gifted and well-educated, you have never known hardship or heartbreak." That failure that you experience can be life changing. It can make you see the world in a new way. For J.K. Rowling failure meant courage. " I stopped pretending to myself that I was anything other than what I was, and began to direct all my energy into finishing the only work that mattered to me. Had I really succeeded at anything else, I might never have found the determination to succeed in the one arena I believed I truly belonged. I was set free, because my greatest fear had been realised, and I was still alive." No one is perfect. Perfect is boring. If we were all perfect what would we have to live for? Our failures are what make us who we are. The type of person you are is how you respond to failure, whether you let it tear you down or make you a new person. In Conan O'Brien's commencement speech at Dartmouth University he said "It is our failure to become our perceived ideal that ultimately defines us and makes us unique. It’s not easy, but if you accept your misfortune and handle it right, your perceived failure can be a catalyst for profound re-invention." You may become the most successful and accomplished person in the world, but you will never get there without failing first.
In order to succeed in life you have to fail at some point. J.K. Rowling knows that failure is an important part of success. "On this wonderful day when we are gathered together to celebrate your academic success, I have decided to talk to you about the benefits of failure." Some people might question this and wonder how in the world failure can help you succeed. Failure can push you to succeed, to be better and to over come your mistakes and misfortunes. "You might be driven by a fear of failure quite as much as a desire for success." Many people are afriad of failure and so was J.K. Rowling "What I feared most for myself at your age was not poverty, but failure." I believe that you can't fear failure because then you will never be able to achieve your goals because you're too scared of dissapointment. Instead of fearing failure you should accept it. Accept that it is a part of life and let it be the force propelling you to be successful.
Everyone experiences failure at some point in their lives, famous people, professional athletes, even people who have graduated from Yale or Harvard. Conan O'brien said in his commencement speech at Dartmouth University " But today I tell you that whether you fear it or not, disappointment will come. The beauty is that through disappointment you can gain clarity, and with clarity comes conviction and true originality." J.K. Rowling shared her experience with failure in her speech "Now, I am not going to stand here and tell you that failure is fun. That period of my life was a dark one, and I had no idea that there was going to be what the press has since represented as a kind of fairy tale resolution. I had no idea then how far the tunnel extended, and for a long time, any light at the end of it was a hope rather than a reality."
You may experience failure early in life, J.K. Rowling said "I am not dull enough to suppose that because you are young, gifted and well-educated, you have never known hardship or heartbreak." That failure that you experience can be life changing. It can make you see the world in a new way. For J.K. Rowling failure meant courage. " I stopped pretending to myself that I was anything other than what I was, and began to direct all my energy into finishing the only work that mattered to me. Had I really succeeded at anything else, I might never have found the determination to succeed in the one arena I believed I truly belonged. I was set free, because my greatest fear had been realised, and I was still alive." No one is perfect. Perfect is boring. If we were all perfect what would we have to live for? Our failures are what make us who we are. The type of person you are is how you respond to failure, whether you let it tear you down or make you a new person. In Conan O'Brien's commencement speech at Dartmouth University he said "It is our failure to become our perceived ideal that ultimately defines us and makes us unique. It’s not easy, but if you accept your misfortune and handle it right, your perceived failure can be a catalyst for profound re-invention." You may become the most successful and accomplished person in the world, but you will never get there without failing first.
Monday, May 14, 2012
98. Just When I Think I Am Done
Lately it seems as if every time I finally accomplish something, I realize I have another thing to do. I've been so stressed out from soccer, lacrosse, school and homework it feels like that's all I'm ever doing and I never get time to relax anymore! I also don't much sleep. It's a rare occasion when I get to bed before 11 p.m. on school nights. The only days I don't have soccer, lacrosse or school are Sundays which I spend doing homework and trying ot catch up on sleep. This sounds like a lot of complaining but I really just need a break from it all! When I'm done with school, I have a lacrosse game and when I think I finally get to go home I realize I have soccer practice after that. Just when I think I'm done with tests for the week another teacher schedules one or assigns an essay or a project. Just when I think I can finally sleep in on the weekend I find out I have a soccer game on Saturday in Long Island, four hours away. Just when I think I can finally go to bed I have to stay up to write letters to college coaches for my soccer tournament the next weekend. It never ends. The only break I get is when regents week is over in June, and just when I think I am done, my break ends and school soccer starts in August.
Thursday, May 10, 2012
Love to Know Slideshow
http://freelance-writing.lovetoknow.com/Slideshow:Free_Writing_Prompts~8
These people are celebrating because they just got to their hotel in the Bahamas! They won a paid vacation to an island of their choice and they couldn't be more exicited because none of them have been on a vacation in the past five years! One of the men heard that the game show, Jeopardy, was offering a prize pf a free vacation to any island you wanted! The man sent in a registration form to get on the show and he had to give a reason for why him, his wife, his brother and her wife all deserved a relaxing two week vacation. He explained how his wife lost her job a few years ago and how it has been hard on them. She has a new job at a local clothing store but it doesn't pay much. Last year they had to give away their dog because they couldn't afford it. His brother's wife was dealing with the loss of her father and it has been a tough year for all of them. A vacation would mean the world to them. His application was a good enough reason to get them on the show. They ended up winning the game and the vacation they had always dreamed of!
Tuesday, May 8, 2012
Sunday, May 6, 2012
Philosophy
Naturalism: Naturalism is the belief that nothing exists beyond the laws of nature and the natural universe. It also states that, if anything does exsist beyond nature, it does not have any affect on the natural world. Followers also don't believe in ghosts or spirits. Paul Kurtz argues that nature can be understood by the main materials of mass, energy and physical and chemical properties. The first ideas of naturalism appeared in the works of pre-Socratic philosophers. The principles and investigations of these philosophers is very similar to naturalism. Thales, who was one of these early philosophers, was considered to be the father of science. I don't agree with the main ideas of this philosophy because we have no proof that there is nothing beyond nature. I believe that God created nature and that there is more to life than the basic elements of nature even if it is beyond what we can see. I don't necessarily believe in ghosts but I believe that when a loved one dies, in a way they are watching over us. If someone survives a car crash when it seemed to be close to impossible, maybe there was someone, somewhere watching over them and protecting them. I think that maybe there is more than just "getting lucky" and that there is a reason for things happening the way they do. Maybe the things that exist beyond nature do affect us and we just don't realize it.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Philosophical_naturalism
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Philosophical_naturalism
Wednesday, May 2, 2012
TU Tuesday- Classified
These beautiful 14 week old puppies, born on January 13, 2012, are ready for your home. They are playful, love the outdoors, paper trained and have healthy diets. The Bordeaux is a wonderful family pet; great company for children and loyal to their owners.
Inquire at (518)635-4353
60 Day Payment plans can be arranged! We love to hear from you.
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A Surprise for Mom
Dad and I love to walk down into the village together during the summer. On a boiling hot day we love to stop at the local ice cream shop and get home made vanilla ice cream from our good friend Jerry. We always sit outside at the front tables and watch the cars drive through the village. We play a game to see who can spot the most yellow cars. I'm usually the winner of that game since dad's eyesight isn't very keen.
A couple of weeks ago dad and I headed doen to the village to buy mom a birthday gift. We went to the pottery store and got her a few nice mugs and cups because she loves to drink her tea. It was such a nice day out so we decided to take the long way home. While on our walk we saw a man from far away with a big brown box next to him on the street. People were huddled around him to get a good look at what was inside. I ran ahead of dad so I could find out for myself. I ran up to the group of people and looked inside at adorable little brown puppies!
The look on my face must've gave away how excited I was because the man started laughing. He told me they were "beautiful 14 week old puppies, born on January 13, 2012." He also told me they were ready to take home for anyone who wanted to purchase one! When my dad saw the puppies a huge smile crossed his face. He grew up on a farm and had many dogs so he loves them. I've always wanted one but mom was never very interested in getting one. I looked at my dad with the best puppy dog eyes I had and begged him to let us get one. They were so cute and the man told us "They are playful, love the outdoors, paper trained and have healthy diets." It took a little convincing but after about ten minutes and when I was close to tears my dad finally gave in.
I was so excited that I finally had my own puppy! I couldn't wait to get home to show mom! When we got home she was outside gardening. She greeted us with a big wave then stopped when she saw the puppy in dad's hands. She looked confused and surprised as I sprinted up to her. I told her we bought a puppy! Her face went pale. I calmed her down though, I told her the man had said that "The Bordeaux is a wonderful family pet; great company for children and loyal to their owners." Mom tried to act calm but I could tell she was a little shaken up. Dad asked if she wanted to hold her but mom said she would later.
Dad and I took the puppy inside and let her walk around a little to become familiar with her new home. We were trying to decide on a nice name for her. We thought of a bunch, Rosie, Bailey, Bud, Lilly, but none of them sounded just right for her. Mom just watched the puppy from a distance but then suggested the name Hollie. Dad and I smiled. Hollie was the perfect name for our new puppy. At first mom wouldn't even touch Hollie. She stayed clear of her except for cleaning up Hollie's messes. I tried to get mom to come outside and play with us but she said she would rather just watch us and drink her tea.
Two weeks went by and mom still hadn't shown any interest in Hollie. Dad and I were walking into town but we left Hollie behind with mom. He told me if mom didn't want to keep Hollie we were going to have to bring her back. I was heartbroken. I couldn't believe this was really happening. Dad said we would give it another week or two but that's it. After that I prepared to say my goodbye's to Hollie because it didn't look like I was going to keep her.
The next morning I woke up early when I heard clapping and laughter from downstairs. I went down to see what was going on and I was in awe. Mom was laughing and smiling watching Hollie play with her toy.
"Look honey! She can roll over and she tries to chase her tail!" Dad came in from outside and asked what all the commotion was. I told him I guess we get to keep Hollie afterall.
Inquire at (518)635-4353
60 Day Payment plans can be arranged! We love to hear from you.
http://timesunion.kaango.com/ad-akc-champion-blood-dogue-de-bordeaux-puppies-m-f/20548029
A Surprise for Mom
Dad and I love to walk down into the village together during the summer. On a boiling hot day we love to stop at the local ice cream shop and get home made vanilla ice cream from our good friend Jerry. We always sit outside at the front tables and watch the cars drive through the village. We play a game to see who can spot the most yellow cars. I'm usually the winner of that game since dad's eyesight isn't very keen.
A couple of weeks ago dad and I headed doen to the village to buy mom a birthday gift. We went to the pottery store and got her a few nice mugs and cups because she loves to drink her tea. It was such a nice day out so we decided to take the long way home. While on our walk we saw a man from far away with a big brown box next to him on the street. People were huddled around him to get a good look at what was inside. I ran ahead of dad so I could find out for myself. I ran up to the group of people and looked inside at adorable little brown puppies!
The look on my face must've gave away how excited I was because the man started laughing. He told me they were "beautiful 14 week old puppies, born on January 13, 2012." He also told me they were ready to take home for anyone who wanted to purchase one! When my dad saw the puppies a huge smile crossed his face. He grew up on a farm and had many dogs so he loves them. I've always wanted one but mom was never very interested in getting one. I looked at my dad with the best puppy dog eyes I had and begged him to let us get one. They were so cute and the man told us "They are playful, love the outdoors, paper trained and have healthy diets." It took a little convincing but after about ten minutes and when I was close to tears my dad finally gave in.
I was so excited that I finally had my own puppy! I couldn't wait to get home to show mom! When we got home she was outside gardening. She greeted us with a big wave then stopped when she saw the puppy in dad's hands. She looked confused and surprised as I sprinted up to her. I told her we bought a puppy! Her face went pale. I calmed her down though, I told her the man had said that "The Bordeaux is a wonderful family pet; great company for children and loyal to their owners." Mom tried to act calm but I could tell she was a little shaken up. Dad asked if she wanted to hold her but mom said she would later.
Dad and I took the puppy inside and let her walk around a little to become familiar with her new home. We were trying to decide on a nice name for her. We thought of a bunch, Rosie, Bailey, Bud, Lilly, but none of them sounded just right for her. Mom just watched the puppy from a distance but then suggested the name Hollie. Dad and I smiled. Hollie was the perfect name for our new puppy. At first mom wouldn't even touch Hollie. She stayed clear of her except for cleaning up Hollie's messes. I tried to get mom to come outside and play with us but she said she would rather just watch us and drink her tea.
Two weeks went by and mom still hadn't shown any interest in Hollie. Dad and I were walking into town but we left Hollie behind with mom. He told me if mom didn't want to keep Hollie we were going to have to bring her back. I was heartbroken. I couldn't believe this was really happening. Dad said we would give it another week or two but that's it. After that I prepared to say my goodbye's to Hollie because it didn't look like I was going to keep her.
The next morning I woke up early when I heard clapping and laughter from downstairs. I went down to see what was going on and I was in awe. Mom was laughing and smiling watching Hollie play with her toy.
"Look honey! She can roll over and she tries to chase her tail!" Dad came in from outside and asked what all the commotion was. I told him I guess we get to keep Hollie afterall.
Sunday, April 29, 2012
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You will need about 8 legs and 8
bodies of the squid. I buy squid that is already cleaned and the tentacle
(legs) and bodies are separated. Squid that is already cleaned and dressed
can be found at most supermarkets. Some packages may have more legs than
bodies or vice versa. Wash squid and pat dry. Then coat with egg and dip in
flour, sprinkle with seasonings. Pour oil in frying pan on medium-high and
let it get hot before putting squid in. Be careful of splatters from oil. Fry
until golden brown and sprinkle each piece with lemon juice. Makes 6 to 8
Servings.
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·
1/2 Lb. Squid, Cleaned and Dressed: I remember when my
family ordered kalamari at a restaurant and my sisters didn't know what it
was. The look on their faces was absolutely priceless when they found out it
was squid and they were couldn't believe my parents and i were actually eating
it! They still haven't tried kalamari no matter how many times we order it.
·
Salt & Pepper to Taste: Whenever I help my mom cook food for
thanksgiving and other holidays she always lets me be the last taste-tester.
She always wants my opinion about whether there is enough salt and pepper or if
there is too much. I love helping her in the kitchen and especially tasting all
her delicious food!
·
Garlic Salt or Garlic Powder to Taste: My mom is obsessed with getting
all sorts of crazy kitchen gadgets and one time she brought home a garlic
chopper that made it really fast and easy to cut garlic and onions. My sisters
tried it out and it didn't work very well. Of course they managed to break it.
My mom was really upset that it didn't work out very well but we did end up
being able to fix it. We haven't used that garlic chopper in a long time.
·
1 Egg, Beaten: I remember wondering why my mom's scrambled
eggs always tasted so much better than the kind they give you at restaurants
and hotels. She told me that she put a secret ingredient in them and
that's what made them taste a lot better. She showed me how to make
them and then add in cheese before they're done cooking and it gives them
so much more flavor. I was so excited and I liked it so much so now I make
scrambled eggs for myself all the time.
·
1/2 to 1 Cup Flour: A couple years ago when we were making an apple pie
for thanksgiving dessert my sister Sara's job was to put flour on the kitchen
counter so we could roll out the dough so it wouldn't stick. She thought it
would be fun to sprinkle the flour all around the counter very nicely but she
started to get a little too crazy with it. She got flour in everyones hair and
all over the kitchen. We laughed about it but my mom wasn't too happy when she
was cleaning up the mess.
·
3/4 Cup Olive Oil: Once when my family went out to eat at an
Italian restaurant the waitor gave us oil with vinegar to dip the bread
in. This was the first time my sisters had seen that before and they fell in
love with it. They made my mom go out and buy our own oil and vinegar to eat
with our bread whenever we wanted at home. Now every time we have Italian
dinners at home we eat our bread with oil and vinegar!
· Lemon Juice: My mom
and I love mexican food and we make it all the time- fajitas, tacos, salsa we
love it all! She loves finding new recipes to make and once she found
a new recipe for salsa that sounded really good so we wanted to try it out.
Everything went well and it was tasting fine until we put in the lemon juice at
the end. We were so excited to taste our new salsa but it was so sour! We
couldn't eat it after that but the next time we made it we were extra careful
not to put too much. It ended up tasting amazing
Thursday, April 26, 2012
Famous Poem Starters
But I have promises to keep.
And miles to go before I sleep.
From Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening by Robert Frost
But I have promises to keep.
And miles to go before I sleep.
I have opportunities to fullfill,
and there's no time to stand still.
I have goals to reach,
and ideas to preach.
I have spirit to spread,
and so much that needs to be said.
I have wisdom to gain,
and I'll keep going through the pain.
I have adventures to experience
and no time for an interference.
I have so much to do,
and so much to say.
So little time,
so I'm starting today.
And miles to go before I sleep.
From Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening by Robert Frost
But I have promises to keep.
And miles to go before I sleep.
I have opportunities to fullfill,
and there's no time to stand still.
I have goals to reach,
and ideas to preach.
I have spirit to spread,
and so much that needs to be said.
I have wisdom to gain,
and I'll keep going through the pain.
I have adventures to experience
and no time for an interference.
I have so much to do,
and so much to say.
So little time,
so I'm starting today.
Monday, April 23, 2012
Nursery Rhymes ARE Relevant to Life
http://www-personal.umich.edu/~pfa/dreamhouse/nursery/rhymes/ants.html
The Ants go marching
The ants go marching one by one.
The ants go marching one by one.
The ants go marching one by one;
And they all go marching
This nursery rhyme is relevant to my life because when I was in elementary school I used to have to stay after for Y-time because my parents worked. A couple of my bestfriends and I would always go exploring near the woods around the playground. One day we found a big dirt area with tons of ant holes and hundreds of big black ants! Back then we didn't find bugs gross at all and we were so amazed by them. Everyday during Y-time we would run over to our spot by the playground and watch the ants as they ran around along the dirt. We would even pick them up and try to build our own homes for them although it didn't always work. This was where we would spend most of our time. Watching the ants fascinated us so much. It seems weird to think that I could be so intrigued by them when I was younger and now I absolutely hate bugs.
Sunday, April 22, 2012
Turn your Inkblot into a Butterfly
Back in middle school
I used to think cliques were okay.
I used to think
not everyone
belonged in the same clique.
I used to pay attention
to what was "cool"
and what wasn't.
I used to be afraid of being
different.
I didn't realize that being in a clique
meant leaving other poeple out.
I was blind to how my actions
might affect others.
I've come a long way since then.
Being "cool" stopped being important.
Being friends with everyone was what mattered.
Cliques started to become a foreign lanuage.
I tried to include everyone
and made sure no one got left behind
because I started to understand that being a nice person meant you were cool.
Wednesday, April 18, 2012
Gina Peca
http://blog.timesunion.com/ginapeca/hello-its-me/4/
http://blog.timesunion.com/ginapeca/
Gina Peca describes herself as "...a 52 year old stay at home mom who is trying to find my way back into the “real” world." She keeps busy by caring for her two sons and running a cancer foundation in memory of her daughter and she is a wife of a man battling a brain tumor. "Like most parents, my husband and I have juggled soccer tournaments, basketball games, baseball games, ski club, school activities, volleyball practice and family trips." She clearly has a lot going on in her life and has also gone through some tragic events. The Catie Hoch Foundation is the foundation that was established for her daughter before she died. Gina is very devoted to this foundation and supporting anyone else who may be going through the same thing with their loved ones. On her blog I read an article about a little girl who recently passed away that was battling the same type of cancer as her daughter Catie. The author can relate to the parents of the girl, Ila Jean, because she lost her daughter 11 years ago. "I want to say to them, right now your mind may be playing an endless loop of her last days and you may think you will never feel joy again. But somewhere down the road, and no one knows how long it will take, you will feel happiness." She tries to give hope to these parents and says that one day "...you will wake up and not feel that weight pressing against your chest." Gina send strength to this family because she knows just how much they need it at this time. "The next part of their journey is not an easy one." She tells them to be grateful for everything they do have which is exactly what Gina does. She is living a "roller coaster of a life" and is slowly getting back into the swing of things by blogging and hoping to help other people as well as overcome her stuggles.
http://blog.timesunion.com/ginapeca/
Gina Peca describes herself as "...a 52 year old stay at home mom who is trying to find my way back into the “real” world." She keeps busy by caring for her two sons and running a cancer foundation in memory of her daughter and she is a wife of a man battling a brain tumor. "Like most parents, my husband and I have juggled soccer tournaments, basketball games, baseball games, ski club, school activities, volleyball practice and family trips." She clearly has a lot going on in her life and has also gone through some tragic events. The Catie Hoch Foundation is the foundation that was established for her daughter before she died. Gina is very devoted to this foundation and supporting anyone else who may be going through the same thing with their loved ones. On her blog I read an article about a little girl who recently passed away that was battling the same type of cancer as her daughter Catie. The author can relate to the parents of the girl, Ila Jean, because she lost her daughter 11 years ago. "I want to say to them, right now your mind may be playing an endless loop of her last days and you may think you will never feel joy again. But somewhere down the road, and no one knows how long it will take, you will feel happiness." She tries to give hope to these parents and says that one day "...you will wake up and not feel that weight pressing against your chest." Gina send strength to this family because she knows just how much they need it at this time. "The next part of their journey is not an easy one." She tells them to be grateful for everything they do have which is exactly what Gina does. She is living a "roller coaster of a life" and is slowly getting back into the swing of things by blogging and hoping to help other people as well as overcome her stuggles.
Wednesday, April 4, 2012
NYT Tuesday
Katniss
A female warrior,
a different kind of hero.
She defends the fragile society; ready to confront whatever awaits her.
An athlete, an idol.
Outrageously bold and believes in taking risks.
Captivating: the right word to describe her.
She nurtures yet kills,
but does both extremely well.
Unique and competitive.
She is so important to many girls and women.
One of the truest feeling and complex female characters.
A Radical Female Hero From Dystopia:http://www.nytimes.com/2012/04/08/movies/katniss-everdeen-a-new-type-of-woman-warrior.html?pagewanted=1&_r=1&hpw
The Met, the "Ring" and the Rage Against the Machine:http://www.nytimes.com/2012/04/04/arts/music/peter-gelb-on-wagners-ring-cycle-at-met-opera.html?scp=1&sq=The%20Met,%20the%20%22Ring%22%20and%20the%20Rage%20Against%20the%20Machine&st=cse
-Lauren, 15, Guilderland NY
A female warrior,
a different kind of hero.
She defends the fragile society; ready to confront whatever awaits her.
An athlete, an idol.
Outrageously bold and believes in taking risks.
Captivating: the right word to describe her.
She nurtures yet kills,
but does both extremely well.
Unique and competitive.
She is so important to many girls and women.
One of the truest feeling and complex female characters.
A Radical Female Hero From Dystopia:http://www.nytimes.com/2012/04/08/movies/katniss-everdeen-a-new-type-of-woman-warrior.html?pagewanted=1&_r=1&hpw
The Met, the "Ring" and the Rage Against the Machine:http://www.nytimes.com/2012/04/04/arts/music/peter-gelb-on-wagners-ring-cycle-at-met-opera.html?scp=1&sq=The%20Met,%20the%20%22Ring%22%20and%20the%20Rage%20Against%20the%20Machine&st=cse
-Lauren, 15, Guilderland NY
Monday, April 2, 2012
Did you have a favorite blanket or toy? Tell about it.
On my first birthday I got my most favorite gift that I still have today. The gift was a big stuffed teddy bear from my parents. I couldn't say much at that age, but once I started to talk a little more bear was one of the few words I knew, so I named my stuffed teddy Bearbear! Once I got Bearbear he never left my side no matter where I went or what I was doing. We ate together, slept together, played outside, did arts and crafts, played hide and seek, took naps, etc. Bearbear was my best friend. I was never lonely with Bearbear around and he kept me company until my sisters were born but even after they were born Bearbear was still with me constantly. Even as I got older he was never forgotten. I started giving my old toys and stuffed animals away and every time I thought maybe it was time to let Bearbear go I just couldn't. A part of me couldn't let go of him. I gave away all my stuffed dogs, my other teddy bears, cats, bunnies, everything except Bearbear. It seemed like he was a part of me now and I didn't want to find out if I would be okay without him or not. I decided I would keep him but maybe it was time to put him in the closet instead of sleeping on my bed with him. I kept him in a safe place and I knew he was there but it just wasn't the same. After a few weeks I gave up and decided I didn;t care how old I was or what anyone thought about Bearbear. So he came back out of the closet and he has been sleeping in my bed with me every night ever since.
Thursday, March 29, 2012
J= Jimmy Buffett's Margaritaville
Jimmy Buffett's Maragaritaville is one of the best restaurants I have eaten at. There aren't many restaurants located in the northeast but if you're ever traveling south there is one in Myrtle Beach (the one I went to), Nashville, Florida, New Orleans, Arizona, and a few other locations out west. Margaritaville has a great family environment. The restaurant is so upbeat and fun with its tropical setting. Right in the center of the restaurant is a humungous statue of a margarita! The last time I went there was a parrot outside! They have live music playing every night of the week and on a rare occasion you might see Jimmy Buffett himself! They even have a gift shop in another part of the restaurant with Jimmy Buffett souvenirs. The service there is always friendly and entertaining. The restaurant in Myrtle Beach is located in the perfect spot; right at the center of Broadway at the Beach with shopping, rides and plenty of other attractions. The menu includes plenty of delicious burgers, sandwiches, chicken, shrimp and tons of other seafood. The meals are reasonably priced with burgers and sandwiches around $12 and seafood and steak around $20. I would definately reccomend going to Jimmy Buffett's Margaritaville for a night of entertainment, great food and great music!
Monday, March 26, 2012
The Book that Changed My Life
The book that changed my life is A Child Called "It" by Dave Pelzer. This book is an autobiography about a boy (Dave Pelzer) who was brutally abused as a child. I think the reason this book is so powerful and inspiring is because it's an autobiography. The author is telling us his story from his point of view and that makes the experience so real. Reading him describe how he was so badly abused throughout his childhood was heartbreaking. I just couldn't believe what I was reading. I couldn't imagine any parent would be cruel enough to torture their child over and over again to the point where they are near death. The author doesn't hold back anything. He describes in detail the pain of being beaten and starved by his alcoholic mother. Some of the suffering she put him through brought me to tears. At some parts it was almost too much for me to handle just reading about the misery he had to deal with every single minute of every single day. It seems unbearable for a child to live like that and put up with such horrible torment. I can't understand why or how a mother could ever harm her own child to the point where she sees them as just an "it". Reading Dave Pelzer's book made take a minute to stop and think about how fortunate I really am. Not only that but also made me realize that child abuse is a real and horrible thing, that it does happen, probably more often than we think. This book took me away from my happy life and made me look through someone else's eyes. There are so many horrid and terrible things that happen in this world that most people don't even notice. We live in a world with so many faults and tragedies and reading Dave Pelzer's story broke my heart in more ways than one. I am thankful for everything I've been blessed with and I can only hope and pray for anyone who is suffering in this world. I will never forget A Child Called "It".
Sunday, March 25, 2012
Bucket List
1. Go to Australia. I've always been fascinated with this country because of the wildlife and the environment. I also love their accents!
2. Play soccer in college. Soccer is something I love doing and to be able to play for my school with new teammates and friends would be an amazing experience.
3. Ride a motorcycle. Even though it can be dangerous it looks so thrilling!
4. Go water skiing. I've gone tubing and I absolutely love it. Water skiing seems like just as much fun!
5. Go scuba diving. Underwater life amazes me. I'd love to see it up close.
6. Go horseback riding on the beach. The beach is one of my favorite places to be. A nice horseback ride along the shore sounds perfect to me. Expecially at sunset!
7. Sing karaoke. This has always been something I've wanted to do. Even though I'm not a good singer I still love to sing and dance!
8. Jump from a cliff into deep water. I love the feeling of anything that is breathtaking and maybe a little scary.
9. Learn to surf. I think surfing is an incredible sport and something I would enjoy learning because I love the ocean.
10. Ride in a hot air balloon. A view from up that high would be magnificent!
2. Play soccer in college. Soccer is something I love doing and to be able to play for my school with new teammates and friends would be an amazing experience.
3. Ride a motorcycle. Even though it can be dangerous it looks so thrilling!
4. Go water skiing. I've gone tubing and I absolutely love it. Water skiing seems like just as much fun!
5. Go scuba diving. Underwater life amazes me. I'd love to see it up close.
6. Go horseback riding on the beach. The beach is one of my favorite places to be. A nice horseback ride along the shore sounds perfect to me. Expecially at sunset!
7. Sing karaoke. This has always been something I've wanted to do. Even though I'm not a good singer I still love to sing and dance!
8. Jump from a cliff into deep water. I love the feeling of anything that is breathtaking and maybe a little scary.
9. Learn to surf. I think surfing is an incredible sport and something I would enjoy learning because I love the ocean.
10. Ride in a hot air balloon. A view from up that high would be magnificent!
Tuesday, March 20, 2012
The Language of Song
Je Cours by Kyo http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M1QnH2RypYYnglish
Song lyrics French and English translation: http://lyricstranslate.com/en/Le-Cours-Le-Cours.html
Today is the big day, the day my life changes and I start a new chapter. Today I go to college. As sad as I am leaving my friends and family, it's time for me to begin a journey that will lead me to the rest of my life. I have so many mixed emotions passing through me. I'm scared, excited, nervous, anxious and hopeful, all at the same time. I finish packing me last bag and zip it up as my mom walks in the door.
"Ready to go, honey?" she says.
"I'm as ready as I'll ever be," I reply.
We pack up the car and in minutes were on the road. The whole way down I was pretty quiet. All I could think about was how much this matters in my life. After almost dropping out of highschool I'm lucky I got into college. It wasn't easy but I dealt with it one step at a time. School has never been my forte. I always fell behind the other students and needed extra help. I won't be able to get as much help in college though, so this is my chance to prove to everyone that I can do this. I need to do this. I need to prove to myself that I can accomplish something on my own.
"You know your father and I are so proud of you," my mom says as we near the campus.
"I know we've been hard on you but it's only because we want you to succeed and we know you are capable of that," my dad adds.
"I know," I respond. "I think I hit rock bottom last year but that's what brought me to where I am now."
We pull up to the campus and start unpacking the car. I notice my parents take their time because they want to savor every minute with me before it's finally time for them to leave. I know I'll miss them everyday but this is something I have to do alone no matter how hard it is. It might be a struggle everyday but in the end it will be what saves me.
Song lyrics French and English translation: http://lyricstranslate.com/en/Le-Cours-Le-Cours.html
Today is the big day, the day my life changes and I start a new chapter. Today I go to college. As sad as I am leaving my friends and family, it's time for me to begin a journey that will lead me to the rest of my life. I have so many mixed emotions passing through me. I'm scared, excited, nervous, anxious and hopeful, all at the same time. I finish packing me last bag and zip it up as my mom walks in the door.
"Ready to go, honey?" she says.
"I'm as ready as I'll ever be," I reply.
We pack up the car and in minutes were on the road. The whole way down I was pretty quiet. All I could think about was how much this matters in my life. After almost dropping out of highschool I'm lucky I got into college. It wasn't easy but I dealt with it one step at a time. School has never been my forte. I always fell behind the other students and needed extra help. I won't be able to get as much help in college though, so this is my chance to prove to everyone that I can do this. I need to do this. I need to prove to myself that I can accomplish something on my own.
"You know your father and I are so proud of you," my mom says as we near the campus.
"I know we've been hard on you but it's only because we want you to succeed and we know you are capable of that," my dad adds.
"I know," I respond. "I think I hit rock bottom last year but that's what brought me to where I am now."
We pull up to the campus and start unpacking the car. I notice my parents take their time because they want to savor every minute with me before it's finally time for them to leave. I know I'll miss them everyday but this is something I have to do alone no matter how hard it is. It might be a struggle everyday but in the end it will be what saves me.
Sunday, March 18, 2012
Wednesday, March 14, 2012
TU Tuesday- Crime
http://www.timesunion.com/default/article/Mo-man-convicted-of-murdering-infant-son-3407642.php
http://www.crimevictimsunited.org/measure11/murderguidelines.htm
http://www.ehow.com/about_5466082_murder-sentencing-guidelines.html
Question: How does a jury determine how long a person's sentence is? What factors contribute to the sentence?
I read an article about a man who was convicted of killing his 8-month-old son who he claims was kidnapped by intruders while the man was knocked out. The article explains "The 31-year-old Carthage man faces 10 to 30 years in prison when he's sentenced April 30." According to the Sentencing Guidelines as Applied to Murder "Sentencing guidelines specifies "presumptive sentences" for each crime. The presumptive sentence depends on the classification of the offender based on his or her prior convictions." So a huge factor in determining a sentence is their history and if they have previously comitted crimes or been in trouble with the law. Although most people recieve the original sentence the judge can make changes or alterations based on certain circumstances. "Under specific aggravating circumstances, the judge can go up to twice the presumptive sentence (upward departure). Under specific mitigating circumstances, the judge can order a lower sentence (downward departure). " Factors like whether the offender cooperated with the state or played a minor role can make a sentence longer or shorter. Judges must oversee all aspects of the crime. The Murder Sentencing Guidelines describes what they look for. "Murder sentencing guidelines in most jurisidictions take into account considerations such as the the reason for the murder, how it was committed, why it was committed, and any special characteristics of both the victim and the murderer, such as age, disability, or vulnerability. Courts may also consider the murderer's criminal history, and whether the death was related to other crimes such as a drug deal or robbery." Sentencing can vary depending on the state or country you live in. Some states require a death sentence, some have manditory life sentences and others have different minimum sentences.
http://www.crimevictimsunited.org/measure11/murderguidelines.htm
http://www.ehow.com/about_5466082_murder-sentencing-guidelines.html
Question: How does a jury determine how long a person's sentence is? What factors contribute to the sentence?
I read an article about a man who was convicted of killing his 8-month-old son who he claims was kidnapped by intruders while the man was knocked out. The article explains "The 31-year-old Carthage man faces 10 to 30 years in prison when he's sentenced April 30." According to the Sentencing Guidelines as Applied to Murder "Sentencing guidelines specifies "presumptive sentences" for each crime. The presumptive sentence depends on the classification of the offender based on his or her prior convictions." So a huge factor in determining a sentence is their history and if they have previously comitted crimes or been in trouble with the law. Although most people recieve the original sentence the judge can make changes or alterations based on certain circumstances. "Under specific aggravating circumstances, the judge can go up to twice the presumptive sentence (upward departure). Under specific mitigating circumstances, the judge can order a lower sentence (downward departure). " Factors like whether the offender cooperated with the state or played a minor role can make a sentence longer or shorter. Judges must oversee all aspects of the crime. The Murder Sentencing Guidelines describes what they look for. "Murder sentencing guidelines in most jurisidictions take into account considerations such as the the reason for the murder, how it was committed, why it was committed, and any special characteristics of both the victim and the murderer, such as age, disability, or vulnerability. Courts may also consider the murderer's criminal history, and whether the death was related to other crimes such as a drug deal or robbery." Sentencing can vary depending on the state or country you live in. Some states require a death sentence, some have manditory life sentences and others have different minimum sentences.
Monday, March 12, 2012
Thursday, March 8, 2012
Scruples
10. You lose a $25 bet with a friend. Do you wait until the friend demands the money before paying?
If I lost a bet of $25 with my friend I would wait until they demanded the money to give it to them. If they don't ask me for the money then I wouldn't feel bad not giving it to them. I'm not hurting them in any way because they're not losing any money and nothing bad is going to happen if they don't get the money. They would be okay without an extra $25 in their pocket because it isn't a huge amount of money. If they really wanted the money I'm sure they would remember to ask me and make sure I give it to them. I don't think a bet over $25 would affect anyone's friendship and I think a lot of times if it's a bet with your close friend you won't take it as seriously as a bet with someone you might not like. Usually people make bets with eachother to prove the other person wrong and have the satisfaction of being right. The money is just another way to rub it in the other person's face that you won. I wouldn't give my friend the $25 unless they demanded for it.
If I lost a bet of $25 with my friend I would wait until they demanded the money to give it to them. If they don't ask me for the money then I wouldn't feel bad not giving it to them. I'm not hurting them in any way because they're not losing any money and nothing bad is going to happen if they don't get the money. They would be okay without an extra $25 in their pocket because it isn't a huge amount of money. If they really wanted the money I'm sure they would remember to ask me and make sure I give it to them. I don't think a bet over $25 would affect anyone's friendship and I think a lot of times if it's a bet with your close friend you won't take it as seriously as a bet with someone you might not like. Usually people make bets with eachother to prove the other person wrong and have the satisfaction of being right. The money is just another way to rub it in the other person's face that you won. I wouldn't give my friend the $25 unless they demanded for it.
Tuesday, March 6, 2012
My Blog Idea
Now that we're all sophomores in high school we have to start thinking about our future, whether we like it or not. Most of us are 16 years old or will be turning 16 this year and have made many great accomplishments throughout these years. For this blog describe what you hope to accomplish in these next 16 years of your life. Where do you see yourself in the future? Will you go to college? Will you get a job, get married or have kids? Where do you think your life will take you?
My example: With all the hard work and effort I put into school to get good grades, and also playing competitively in soccer, I would hope to have accomplished a great number of things in the next 16 years of my life. I will have gone to at least four years of college, maybe more, depending on what I study in college and what is required for my profession. Right now I am looking into studying communications in college but that could change. I believe I will be able to get into a prestigious college if I continue to keep my grades where they are. I also hope to continue my soccer career through college. I play on a highly competitive team that is ranked 4th in the state. I don’t want to base my college decision on soccer but I will use soccer to help me get into certain schools that may be very hard to get into academically. After college I would definitely be looking to get started in my career, maybe an internship somewhere and gradually work my way up from there. I hope I can move out of my house and be independent. With a few years of working I think I could earn a salary that would allow me to pay for my own living conditions instead of relying on my parents. Once I get comfortable with my job I think I can become very successful if I work as hard as I do now. I see myself getting married and starting to raise a family 16 years from now. Before I do that, though, I would love to travel around the world. Seeing Europe, South America and Australia would be an incredible experience. If my life turned out exactly like this I would have almost nothing to complain about when I’m 32, but along the way I know many things will change. I hope to be a successful and accomplished person but this is only the beginning and I have a long way to go.
Sunday, March 4, 2012
Revisions
Blue
I stare at the aqua ripples of the waves
as they swiftly roll to the sand, over and over.
I look far out to the horizon
where the deep water and bare sky meet,
and are blended together by a sapphire pastel.
Almost as if someone rubbed their thumb over the colors, creating brand new ones.
The endless periwinkle sky is everywhere I look.
I feel calm as I lie down and gaze
at this indigo picture, painted so smoothly, perfectly.
Each component is a different brush stroke.
A cool breeze sweeps over me.
I'm so relaxed I could fall asleep
to the sound of the waves
as they hit the sand over and over.
I Wish I Knew
I can't even begin to explain
or morph it into words.
I can't take it back
when I’m not sure where I went wrong.
I know it makes no sense;
I can’t say I know the answer.
I'm trying to figure it out,
but I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t scared.
This time will be different,
I can promise you that.
But I can't promise it will work,
we'll have to take a chance.
Lauren - your first poem, Blue, is lovely with strong images. I think your second poem would be improved if you also used imagery instead of being so direct in telling the reader what is going on. I suggest you free-write for 5-10 minutes, and see what images pop up.
Mimi Moriarty
I Wish I Knew
I wish I knew how to tell you
but my voice is on mute.
Trying to morph my thoughts to words
is an impossible struggle.
I wish I knew what was
running through your mind.
The deep look in your eyes
makes me yearn for answers.
I wish you knew
how much this is haunting me.
I wish I knew whether to follow
my mind or my heart.
Blue
The aquamarine ripples in the waves
climb on top of one another
as they roll to the sand, over and over.
Where the deep water and bare sky meet;
they are blended together by a sapphire pastel.
It’s as if someone rubbed their thumb on the horizon,
morphing together the calm navy ocean
and endless periwinkle sky.
This indigo picture is a beautiful combination
of peace, harmony and calmness.
I believe that my second poems are better than my first ones. I thought Mimi Moriarty’s advice was very helpful for my poem I Wish I Knew. In the first poem I was too direct with what I was saying. I told the reader exactly what I meant instead of showing them with imagery. I used her advice and free wrote for a few minutes just to see what images popped up in my head that I could use for the poem. In the second poem I said “my voice is on mute” and “this is haunting me”. This gives more visual for the reader and room for their interpretation. My second poem for Blue was also better than my first one. I decided there were certain things that I could take out that weren’t very important. I also decided to take myself out of the poem instead of saying “I look out to the horizon” I just described it without saying “I”. I think cutting down the poem to just descriptions made it a lot better because there was no extra lines or unnecessary things like me being in the poem.
Monday, February 27, 2012
I= Eight People to Emulate
1.Shelby Iapoce- I played varsity soccer with her this year and she works harder than anyone I know. She exceeds in everything she does and pushed me to work hard too.
2.Isaac Malsky- One of the most intelligent people I know. He is very independent and is always discovering new things or ideas. I hope I can someday be as smart as he is.
3.Isla Fisher- A very successful actress (starred in "Confessions of a Shopaholic".) She is funny and beautiful and I would love to be as succesful as she is.
4.Ian Harding- An actor in one of my favorite television shows "Pretty Little Liars". He is a very talent actor.
5.Isaac Deyo- My cousin who has some learning disabilities. He doesn't let that stop him from striving to do his best everyday.
6.Kathy Ireland- A beautifull and successful famous model and business women. She opened her own line of clothing.
7.Laura Ingraham- An extremely successful writer and talk show host. Author of several books and has her own radio show. She is an inspiration for any women who wants to become successful.
8. Jeff Immelt- The chief officer of General Electric which is one of the biggest corporations in the world. It takes a lot of work to achieve what he has done.
2.Isaac Malsky- One of the most intelligent people I know. He is very independent and is always discovering new things or ideas. I hope I can someday be as smart as he is.
3.Isla Fisher- A very successful actress (starred in "Confessions of a Shopaholic".) She is funny and beautiful and I would love to be as succesful as she is.
4.Ian Harding- An actor in one of my favorite television shows "Pretty Little Liars". He is a very talent actor.
5.Isaac Deyo- My cousin who has some learning disabilities. He doesn't let that stop him from striving to do his best everyday.
6.Kathy Ireland- A beautifull and successful famous model and business women. She opened her own line of clothing.
7.Laura Ingraham- An extremely successful writer and talk show host. Author of several books and has her own radio show. She is an inspiration for any women who wants to become successful.
8. Jeff Immelt- The chief officer of General Electric which is one of the biggest corporations in the world. It takes a lot of work to achieve what he has done.
Wednesday, February 15, 2012
TU Tuesday - Culture
use text quoted directly from your article in your response and put it in quotation marks. Then, respond to it by including a link to a POEM from that same culture that connects to the article and use text quoted directly from your poem in your response and put it in quotation marks. The Power Standard this addresses is:
Link to article: http://www.timesunion.com/default/article/Israel-police-New-attack-on-Palestinian-property-2259634.php
Link to poem: http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/jerusalem-12/
I read an article about an attack in Jerusalem on Palestinians by Jewish extremists. There have been tensions between these two groups in Israel for a very long time and is a very tough conflict to control, causing problems within the country. The Jewish extremists were protesting Palestinian settlements. The article explains what happened "The words "price tag" were spray-painted on the house in Beit Ummar, a town near the West Bank city of Hebron, police spokesman Micky Rosenfeld said." The article also talks about how the Hamas militants, who took over the territory, have limited some of the rights of the people like being able to export goods to Europe. "Also Wednesday, the Israeli military said Gaza furniture makers will be allowed to export their goods to Europe this week for the first time since Hamas militants took over the territory in 2007." This article can be connected to a poem by Nizar Qabbani about Jerusalem. He writes about the struggles faced by Israelis, "Oh Jerusalem, the city of sorrow. A big tear wandering in the eye. Who will halt the aggression? On you, the pearl of religions? Who will wash your bloody walls?" He is describing the violent conflicts between Palestinians and Jewish people that are described in the article. He writes to ask for an end to the violence and for peace within his country. Both the article and poem show the problems faced by this culture and how they wonder when peace will come. "Oh Jerusalem my town
Oh Jerusalem my love
Tomorrow the lemon trees will blossom
And the olive trees will rejoice
Your eyes will dance
The migrant pigeons will return
To your sacred roofs
And your children will play again
And fathers and sons will meet
On your rosy hills
My town
The town of peace and olives. "
| Interpret, analyze, and evaluate culturally diverse narratives, poetry and drama, aesthetically and ethically, by making connections to other texts, ideas, cultural perspectives, eras, personal events and situations. Self-select text to respond and develop innovative perspectives. |
Link to article: http://www.timesunion.com/default/article/Israel-police-New-attack-on-Palestinian-property-2259634.php
Link to poem: http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/jerusalem-12/
I read an article about an attack in Jerusalem on Palestinians by Jewish extremists. There have been tensions between these two groups in Israel for a very long time and is a very tough conflict to control, causing problems within the country. The Jewish extremists were protesting Palestinian settlements. The article explains what happened "The words "price tag" were spray-painted on the house in Beit Ummar, a town near the West Bank city of Hebron, police spokesman Micky Rosenfeld said." The article also talks about how the Hamas militants, who took over the territory, have limited some of the rights of the people like being able to export goods to Europe. "Also Wednesday, the Israeli military said Gaza furniture makers will be allowed to export their goods to Europe this week for the first time since Hamas militants took over the territory in 2007." This article can be connected to a poem by Nizar Qabbani about Jerusalem. He writes about the struggles faced by Israelis, "Oh Jerusalem, the city of sorrow. A big tear wandering in the eye. Who will halt the aggression? On you, the pearl of religions? Who will wash your bloody walls?" He is describing the violent conflicts between Palestinians and Jewish people that are described in the article. He writes to ask for an end to the violence and for peace within his country. Both the article and poem show the problems faced by this culture and how they wonder when peace will come. "Oh Jerusalem my town
Oh Jerusalem my love
Tomorrow the lemon trees will blossom
And the olive trees will rejoice
Your eyes will dance
The migrant pigeons will return
To your sacred roofs
And your children will play again
And fathers and sons will meet
On your rosy hills
My town
The town of peace and olives. "
Sunday, February 12, 2012
Valentine's Day
Dear Dad,
I can't even begin to explain how thankful I am to have you as a father. Not every kid has a dad who does as much for them as you do for me. Whenever I need to go somewhere you drive me, when I need help with homework you drop what you're doing to make sure I figure it out. You spoil me all the time even when you get mad for all the things I buy. You're my number one fan. You always have been and you always will be. When I get nervous for a soccer game I look over to the crowd and there you are, standing off to the side because you don't like sitting with all the loud and obnoxious parents. You just enjoy watching me play. I think about some of my friends and how hard their parents are on them especiallly if they play bad. Then I realize: wow my dad would never do that to me. Even if I messed up every single play and didn't do one thing right the whole game I know you would just say "It's okay buddy, you'll get 'em next time." I never stop or take a minute to realize all the little things you do for me everyday that make a huge difference. Sometimes I don't even realize how much of a difference just supporting me and loving me can make. Thank you for being such an incredible father. I love you.
Love, Lauren
I can't even begin to explain how thankful I am to have you as a father. Not every kid has a dad who does as much for them as you do for me. Whenever I need to go somewhere you drive me, when I need help with homework you drop what you're doing to make sure I figure it out. You spoil me all the time even when you get mad for all the things I buy. You're my number one fan. You always have been and you always will be. When I get nervous for a soccer game I look over to the crowd and there you are, standing off to the side because you don't like sitting with all the loud and obnoxious parents. You just enjoy watching me play. I think about some of my friends and how hard their parents are on them especiallly if they play bad. Then I realize: wow my dad would never do that to me. Even if I messed up every single play and didn't do one thing right the whole game I know you would just say "It's okay buddy, you'll get 'em next time." I never stop or take a minute to realize all the little things you do for me everyday that make a huge difference. Sometimes I don't even realize how much of a difference just supporting me and loving me can make. Thank you for being such an incredible father. I love you.
Love, Lauren
Wednesday, February 8, 2012
Time passes as night blooms
Night Blooms, Day Withers
Time passes as night blooms.
The minutes tick down
until blackness.
The world becomes quiet and
mysterious.
A gloomy presence fills the air.
Time passes as day withers.
The seconds tick down
until the sun descends
below the horizon.
I squint to see the tiny glimpse of light
as it disappears.
Time passed as night bloomed.
The stars gleam in the charcoal sky.
The night critters creep out
from behind the shadows.
Sounds of crickets in the distance.
Fireflies speckle the air.
Time passed as day withered.
The moon shines in place of the sun.
Animals take shelter in their homes
as they vanish for the night.
Everything is peaceful while we sleep
until day blooms.
Time passes as night blooms.
The minutes tick down
until blackness.
The world becomes quiet and
mysterious.
A gloomy presence fills the air.
Time passes as day withers.
The seconds tick down
until the sun descends
below the horizon.
I squint to see the tiny glimpse of light
as it disappears.
Time passed as night bloomed.
The stars gleam in the charcoal sky.
The night critters creep out
from behind the shadows.
Sounds of crickets in the distance.
Fireflies speckle the air.
Time passed as day withered.
The moon shines in place of the sun.
Animals take shelter in their homes
as they vanish for the night.
Everything is peaceful while we sleep
until day blooms.
Monday, February 6, 2012
Comic Connection
Pep Talk
Go for it.
I think this applies to my life because when I'm making a decision and It's really hard for me to choose one way or the other I think to myself: go for it. I always realize I get mad at myself whenever I don't do something because I was unsure or a little nervous about it. I used to be terrified of rollercoasters but one day me and all my friends went to an amusement park together. I was really nervous because all the rides looked huge and frightening. My friends all rushed over to get in line. They urged me to come with with them. I was about to say no when I thought "just go for it." I would never know if I liked it or not until I tried it. I knew I would regret never going on one so I agreed to go with them. I was shaking the whole time we were in line but once the rollercoaster started it was incredibly fun! I couldn't believe how much I enjoyed it and afterwards I was the first person to shout "let's do it again!" Ever since then I've loved rollercoasters. I would've never known that if I didn't go for it. The same thing happened this year with trying out a new sport. Soccer is my main sport but this year my friend urged me to do lacrosse. I wasn't sure because I have never played so I didn't think I would be good or be able to make the team. Then I decided to go for it. I started playing with my friend and I'm getting better and I plan on trying out in march for the school team. I'm sure it will be a great experience. So that's my motto. Go for it.
Wednesday, February 1, 2012
Sunday, January 29, 2012
Original Poems III
Mundane
Pen
I stare at you
as you sit there
in my hand,
unmoving.
I wish you would move,
wish you would write.
I am at a loss for words.
You're supposed to help me out,
you're supposed to know what to say
when I can't find words.
I'm waiting for you to fly across the page
with an amazing story left for me.
I'm waiting for you to come up with something
creative and original.
I wait and wait but you do not move.
Not until I tell you to.
Concrete
Apple
Pen
I stare at you
as you sit there
in my hand,
unmoving.
I wish you would move,
wish you would write.
I am at a loss for words.
You're supposed to help me out,
you're supposed to know what to say
when I can't find words.
I'm waiting for you to fly across the page
with an amazing story left for me.
I'm waiting for you to come up with something
creative and original.
I wait and wait but you do not move.
Not until I tell you to.
Concrete
Apple
I
take a bite. The juice dribbles onto
my tongue, rolling over my taste buds
while they tingle and explode from the
flavor. It’s the perfect combination of
crunchy from the skin and soft from
the inside. The sweetness delights
me. I savor every bite I take, not
eating too fast otherwise it will
be gone too soon. The color
is a perfect red, like a
christmas red.
Springboard Poem
Explore
I want to explore the world.
I wish I could go wherever, whenever.
I need to experience life outside of my home.
I hope to see Europe, South America and Australia.
I feel trapped in a tiny town, when theres so much more to see.
I yearn to find exotic places, people and animals.
I crave adventure.
I imagine myself on a beach in Greece,or a castle in England or a temple in Egypt.
I long to meet new people and see new faces.
I will visit all these places one day.
I am going to adventure and explore no matter what.
I can't wait to see where life takes me.
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